Paranoia - Draft
This is our first draft of our opening scene. In our original script, we wanted the flashback scenes to be black and white so that it shows to the audience that its going back in time in the past at a certain time and place. However when we used the black and white colour, it didn't look right and you could tell that the filming was done in the morning as you can see the sun's reflection in the camera where as we wanted these shots to be as if it's in the dark. This caused a problem for us as it didn't make the atmosphere scary or as if it's a horror film. As this is our first draft, we could use this problem as an experience which we will overcome but to do this we have to find another way to resolve this issue such as maybe filming those particular shots in the dark or changing it to another colour which will bring out that scary effect.
Another problem that I feel isn't right is how some shots go too quicly and the audience can't see what is happening. Though it's supposed to be horror movie and everything should happen quite quick, if I can't tell what is happening in the film then the audience won't be able to either. To resolve this, I am going to have to slow down some parts so that audience get a feel of the film and are able to pick up on what is happening.
Also we haven't put in the production logo at the start which is quite an important thing to miss out as in real films, the production logo symbolises the company's identity and what it does. We completed the production logo abit late which is why we were not able to put it into the film but we will include it in the final piece.
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